Eleanor: How NOT to write a Villain (Extra Salty)

Fnaf’s attempt to create a villain stronger and smarter than William Afton ended up with rather mixed results in the creation of Eleanor, a mess of all sorts of writing tropes that led to an uncompelling narrative. So, let’s take a look at this... THIS. 0:00 Plot derailed, meet Eleanor 1:37 What are the Illusion Discs? 3:30 To be Beautiful 4:24 Eleanor’s Weak Motives & Methods 6:00 Eleanor’s Confusing Origins 7:40 Eleanor is Evil Incarnate 8:09 It was Eleanor the whole time! 10:36 The Successor to Afton 11:32 For Example 12:11 The Plot Stops Making Sense 13:33 A guess we got the Bad Ending 14:03 What actually happened... 14:32 A new book series, the same plot 14:58 THIS IS A PROBLEM TOO 15:06 Possible Fixes to Eleanor? 15:57 Final Thoughts 16:47 ALSO